Re: [Ianaplan] [Iana-strategy] Pete Resnick's Abstain on charter-ietf-ianaplan-00-04: (with COMMENT)

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 04 September 2014 04:55 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Ianaplan] [Iana-strategy] Pete Resnick's Abstain on charter-ietf-ianaplan-00-04: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks for your careful (as always) review, Pete :-)

>   The WG will identify, but not create, such required agreements.

Personally, I think that is reasonable. What do others think?

> NEW
>   Fully documenting the interaction between the IETF and the operator
>   of IETF protocol parameters registries may require detailed terms of
>   agreements or other details of procedures that are normally delegated
>   to and handled by the IAB or IAOC. The working group will not attempt
>   to produce or discuss documentation for these details, but will
>   request the IAB or IAOC to provide them, either to be included as an
>   appendix to the WG's output document, or in a separate document
>   provided by the IAB or IAOC.

I’m fine with the rationale for the change and most of your text, but I have trouble understanding the last parts. What if we simply said "…. but will request the IAB or IAOC to provide them separately."?

> I also think the first milestone should be updated similarly to not talk
> in terms of the "proposal”.

Ok.

Jari