[Iasa20] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc2031bis-05: (with COMMENT)

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Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc2031bis-05: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Two easy to address comments:

(1) §1: "As a result of the the IASA 2.0 structure [I-D.ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis]
and formation of the IETF LLC, the relationship between the IETF and ISOC has
changed."  I think that I-D.ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis should be a Normative
reference.

(2) I-D.ietf-iasa2-rfc4071bis uses this document as a Normative reference, and
points to it when defining ISOC (in §4.1); but there is no explicit reference
to ISOC, or even its mission (which seems to be quoted in §2).  Please add one.