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Re: [Id-event] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11: (with COMMENT)

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From: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Id-event] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks for your review, Roman.  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-12 is intended to address your comments.  Detailed replies are inline, prefixed by "Mike>".

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Subject: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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** Section 2.2.  Per the ack array, is it fair to assume that an empty array is ignored?

Mike> It unambiguously is now. ;-)

** Section 2.4.  Per “After a period of time configured between the SET Transmitter and Recipient, …”, is that configuration out of band/scope for this specification?

Mike> Yes, it's now explicitly described as being out of band.

** Section 2.4.1.  Figure 1.  All of the other figures seem to explicitly state that this is a non-normative example.  s/The following is an example request/The following is a non-normative example of a request/.

Mike> I made this one consistent with the others.

** Section 4.3.  This section is identical to Section 5.3 of draft-ietf-secevent-http-push.  Please review the recommended clarifications mentioned there -- https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/id-event/9h4_z8S-JyMMCbrdW6V7b_YmGbI/

Mike> Also applied here.

				Thanks again,
				-- Mike

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