Re: [Id-event] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-secevent-token-02

Benjamin Kaduk <bkaduk@akamai.com> Tue, 24 October 2017 14:01 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Id-event] WG Last Call for draft-ietf-secevent-token-02
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On 10/23/2017 07:05 PM, Mike Jones wrote:
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> Figure 5. Maybe a signed example would be better, especially that the
> next paragraph mentions that signatures or encryption should be used.
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> Unsigned keeps the draft shorter. ;-)
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That justification sounds like a joke, especially with the smiley.

In-document examples are used to give guidance to the reader, including
implicit guidance; I would strongly prefer for there to be examples that
actually describe the desired/expected common deployment scenario, to
subtly reiterate the expected case.

-Ben