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Re: [Id-event] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11

Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com> Thu, 25 June 2020 05:32 UTC

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From: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>
To: Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Id-event] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11
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Thanks Robert.  I applied your proposed language to the appendix in Push.

				Thanks again,
				-- Mike

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Subject: Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11

Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

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Document: draft-ietf-secevent-http-poll-11
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2020-06-22
IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-13
IESG Telechat date: 2020-06-25

Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

My concerns have been addressed.

I am a little worried about the Appendix A content of -push - it could be misconstrued to say sending SETs over unencrypted channels is supported by the proposed standard. It would ease my worry if you made this change (again to the -push document): OLD:
    If SETs are transmitted over unencrypted channels
New:
    If SETs were allowed to be transmitted over unencrypted channels

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