Re: [Id-event] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-secevent-http-push-12: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Id-event] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-secevent-http-push-12: (with COMMENT)
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Thank you Mike for the quick reaction

-éric

-----Original Message-----
From: Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com>
Date: Thursday, 25 June 2020 at 07:01
To: Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
Cc: "draft-ietf-secevent-http-push@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-secevent-http-push@ietf.org>, "secevent-chairs@ietf.org" <secevent-chairs@ietf.org>, "id-event@ietf.org" <id-event@ietf.org>, Yaron Sheffer <yaronf.ietf@gmail.com>
Subject: RE: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-secevent-http-push-12: (with COMMENT)

    Thanks for your review, Éric.  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-secevent-http-push-13 is intended to address your comments.  Detailed replies are inline, prefixed by "Mike>".

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    Subject: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-secevent-http-push-12: (with COMMENT)

    Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-secevent-http-push-12: No Objection

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    COMMENT:
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    Thank you for the work put into this document.

    I have a single non-blocking comment about section 1: Suggest to clarify 'known to one another', what is meant by 'known' in this context? A reader could understand it as 'known IP address' or ...

    Mike> Thanks for calling this out.  Others did as well.  I reworded this to "The transmitter and recipient are willing to exchange data with one another."

    Regards

    -éric

    				Thanks again,
    				-- Mike