[Idr] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-flow-spec-v6-19: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 05 November 2020 06:15 UTC

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Subject: [Idr] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-flow-spec-v6-19: (with COMMENT)
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Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-flow-spec-v6-19: No Objection

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[[ discuss ]]

[ general ]

* I agree with existing discuss points raised.


[[ comments ]]

[ section 3.8,{1,2} ]

* Per RFC 5952 section 4.3, s/upper hex/lower hex/g for IPv6 address strings.


[[ nits ]]

[ appendix A ]

* s/non of/none of/, I think