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Re: [Idr] John Scudder's Discuss on draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis-14: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net> Tue, 21 February 2023 12:56 UTC

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From: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>
To: Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
CC: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis@ietf.org>, "idr-chairs@ietf.org" <idr-chairs@ietf.org>, IDR List <idr@ietf.org>, Hares Susan <shares@ndzh.com>, Jeffrey Haas <jhaas@pfrc.org>, Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
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Hi Ketan,

> On Feb 21, 2023, at 1:34 AM, Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Thanks for your feedback and further comments/responses. Please check inline below with KT2 for my responses.
> 
> I have also posted an update with the changes as discussed below:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis-16

Looks good to me. Thanks.

—John

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