Re: [Idr] John Scudder's Yes on draft-ietf-idr-eag-distribution-16: (with COMMENT)

Jeff Tantsura <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 19 May 2021 03:15 UTC

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Date: Tue, 18 May 2021 22:15:32 -0500
From: Jeff Tantsura <jefftant.ietf@gmail.com>
To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>, John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>
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Subject: Re: [Idr] John Scudder's Yes on draft-ietf-idr-eag-distribution-16: (with COMMENT)
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John,

Thanks for your review, fixed.

Cheers,
Jeff
On May 6, 2021, 8:48 PM -0500, John Scudder via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>rg>, wrote:
> John Scudder has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-idr-eag-distribution-16: Yes
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> Thanks for the clear and short document! Below are a couple minor editorial comments.
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> 1. Abstract
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> Administrative groups are link attributes advertised used for traffic
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> Advertised, or used, pick one. (Probably keep used and delete advertised.)
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> 2. Section 2
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> This document defines an extension that enable BGP-LS speakers to
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> s/enable/enables/
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