Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-open-policy-15

Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 10 August 2021 16:41 UTC

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On August 10, 2021 at 12:23:09 PM, Alexander Azimov wrote:


Alexander:

Hi!

> We tried our best to carefully consider all your comments, incorporated
> changes accordingly in version -16, and uploaded it.
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-open-policy-16
>
> Our (authors’) responses to your specific comments are inline below and
> marked with [AA/KS].

Thanks for the update!  I'll put this in my queue of things to review. :-)



> Before jumping to the long list of inline comments I'd like to highlight that
> while policy specification is better worded now, their principles remain
> unchanged.

Good!  The intent was to make the specification clear, not to change it.


Thanks!

Alvaro.