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Re: [Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-20

"Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com> Tue, 29 May 2018 20:55 UTC

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>, "draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid@ietf.org>
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Hi Alvaro,
I agree with your comments and have published the -21 version with only these changes.
Thanks,
Acee

From: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Tuesday, May 29, 2018 at 4:20 PM
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Cc: IDR List <idr@ietf.org>, "idr-chairs@ietf.org" <idr-chairs@ietf.org>, John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>
Subject: AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-20
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Resent-To: Stefano Previdi <stefano@previdi.net>, <cf@cisco.com>, Acee Lindem <acee@cisco.com>, Arjun Sreekantiah <arjunhrs@gmail.com>, <hannes@rtbrick.com>
Resent-Date: Tuesday, May 29, 2018 at 4:20 PM

Dear authors:

Thanks for working on the revision of this document!

I just have a couple of minor comments (please see below).  I am starting the IETF Last Call.

Thanks!

Alvaro.


(1) Move the reference:
s/
   [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing] also describes how segment routing
   can be applied to an IPv6 dataplane
   [I-D.ietf-6man-segment-routing-header] (SRv6) using a new IPv6
   routing header containing a stack of SR SIDs encoded as IPv6
   addresses./
   [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing] also describes how segment routing
   can be applied to an IPv6 dataplane
   (SRv6) using a new IPv6
   routing header containing a stack of SR SIDs encoded as IPv6
   addresses [I-D.ietf-6man-segment-routing-header].


(2) The IANA-MPLS-SPECIAL-LABEL is not where the NULL labels are defined -- I think a better reference would be rfc3032.


(3) s/Ah SR domain/An SR domain

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