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[Idr] AD Review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-prefix-sid-20

Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 29 May 2018 20:20 UTC

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Dear authors:

Thanks for working on the revision of this document!

I just have a couple of minor comments (please see below).  I am starting
the IETF Last Call.

Thanks!

Alvaro.


(1) Move the reference:
s/
   [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing] also describes how segment routing
   can be applied to an IPv6 dataplane
   [I-D.ietf-6man-segment-routing-header] (SRv6) using a new IPv6
   routing header containing a stack of SR SIDs encoded as IPv6
   addresses./
   [I-D.ietf-spring-segment-routing] also describes how segment routing
   can be applied to an IPv6 dataplane
   (SRv6) using a new IPv6
   routing header containing a stack of SR SIDs encoded as IPv6
   addresses [I-D.ietf-6man-segment-routing-header].


(2) The IANA-MPLS-SPECIAL-LABEL is not where the NULL labels are defined --
I think a better reference would be rfc3032.


(3) s/Ah SR domain/An SR domain

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