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Re: Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06

Mary Barnes <mary.ietf.barnes@gmail.com> Wed, 09 October 2013 10:10 UTC

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Subject: Re: Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06
From: Mary Barnes <mary.ietf.barnes@gmail.com>
To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>
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Thanks Ben.  We'll fix these nits in the next version.

Mary.


On Tue, Oct 8, 2013 at 3:39 PM, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>
> Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
> or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
>
> Document: draft-yusef-dispatch-ccmp-indication-06
> Reviewer: Ben Campbell
> Review Date: 2013-10-08
> IESG Telechat date: 2013-10-10
>
> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an informational RFC. This
> version addresses all the comments from my last call review of version 04.
> I do have a couple of new (or I missed the first time) editorial comments
> that might be worth addressing if there is a new version prior to approval.
>
> Major issues:
>
> None
>
> Minor issues:
>
> None
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> -- General:
>
> idnits 2.12.18 reports some missing references--please check.
>
> -- Abstract and Intro
>
> Please expand UA and XCON on first mention (Both in Abstract and in
> Section 1).
>
>

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