Re: Gen-art telechat review: draft-mcdonald-ipps-uri-scheme-17

Ira McDonald <blueroofmusic@gmail.com> Wed, 03 December 2014 04:58 UTC

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Hi Pete and Robert,

My mistake - agreed - (c) should go - and no need for the note about PWG
IPP/2.0.
(which will get updated anyway to reference the IETF IPPS spec next year).

Cheers,
- Ira (wearing PWG IPP co-chair and IPP/2.0 co-editor hats)

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On Tue, Dec 2, 2014 at 11:51 PM, Pete Resnick <presnick@qti.qualcomm.com>
wrote:

> On 12/2/14 11:20 AM, Barry Leiba wrote:
>
>> When you suggest saying more, are you suggesting saying more in the
>>>> document?
>>>>
>>>>
>>> I mostly meant the writeup - I expect there will be IESG folks with the
>>> same
>>> questions I had.
>>>
>>>
>> I can do that, sure.
>>
>>
>>
>>>     This document updates:
>>>      ...
>>>     c) IEEE-ISTO PWG IPP Version 2.0 Second Edition [PWG5100.12], by
>>>        extending section 4 'IPP Standards' and section 10 'Security
>>>        Considerations'.
>>>
>>> This RFC-to-be is updating an IEEE-ISTO PWG document, and that seems
>>> exceptional enough to warrant mention about how the organizations
>>> are coordinating that update.
>>>
>>>
>> I'd think that's for PWG to address on their side, no?  If they accept
>> that they can have an IETF RFC formally updating one of their
>> documents, that's their process, not ours, no?
>>
>>
>
> This is to be an IETF document. If the PWG wants to say in one of their
> documents that PWG5100.12 is updated by this IETF document, that's their
> business. But *we* can't say in *our* document that we're updating their
> document. If you need a note, it could say:
>
>       Note: IEEE-ISTO PWG has indicated that they intend to use this
>       document as an update to their IPP Version 2.0 Second Edition
>       [PWG5100.12], by extending section 4 'IPP Standards' and section
>       10 'Security Considerations'.
>
> But (c) should go.
>
> pr
>
> --
> Pete Resnick<http://www.qualcomm.com/~presnick/>
> Qualcomm Technologies, Inc. - +1 (858)651-4478
>
>