Review of draft-ietf-bmwg-virtual-net-04

Jouni Korhonen <jounikor@gmail.com> Wed, 15 February 2017 20:08 UTC

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Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review result: Ready

This document was good informational read. No complaints.

Two editorials:

Line  338: "...possibility of benchmark curation during development of
new..."
  Is it curation or creation?

Line 409: "..VNF, or something as simple as a new poicy to implement
in a VNF, .."
  s/poicy/policy