Last Call updates to draft-farrresnickel-ipr-sanctions

"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Mon, 04 June 2012 21:25 UTC

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From: "Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Subject: Last Call updates to draft-farrresnickel-ipr-sanctions
Date: Mon, 4 Jun 2012 22:25:13 +0100
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Hi,

I posted an update with changes as follows:

Abstract and Introduction:
Clarify applicability to IPR

Introduction:
Add note to clarify this I-D does not address or limit other legal sanctions.

2.2
Fix places where Note Well shows up

3
Clarify first step in sanctions

Throughout
Typos and style 

I believe I replied to all last call comments and have made updates consistent
with those replies. Please shout if you think I missed something.

Thanks,
Adrian

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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
> 
> 	Title           : Sanctions Available for Application to Violators of
IETF IPR
> Policy
> 	Author(s)       : Adrian Farrel
>                           Pete Resnick
> 	Filename        : draft-farrresnickel-ipr-sanctions-06.txt
> 	Pages           : 11
> 	Date            : 2012-06-04
> 
>    The IETF has developed and documented policies that govern the
>    behavior of all IETF participants with respect to Intellectual
>    Property Rights (IPR) about which they might reasonably be aware.
> 
>    The IETF takes conformance to these IPR policies very seriously.
>    However, there has been some ambiguity as to what the appropriate
>    sanctions are for the violation of these policies, and how and by
>    whom those sanctions are to be applied.
> 
>    This document discusses these issues and provides a suite of
>    potential actions that can be taken within the IETF community in
>    cases related to patents.
> 
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