Re: draft-murchison-webdav-prefer-13

[Ken Murchison <[e-mail]>]

Hi Stewart,

Thanks for the review.  Both items have been addressed in version 14.


On 01/13/2017 11:27 AM, Stewart Bryant wrote:
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> Document: draft-murchison-webdav-prefer-13
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review Date: 13 Jan 2016
> IETF LC End Date: 16 January 2017
> IESG Telechat date: 19 January 2017
>
>
> Summary: Ready with nits
>
> This is a well written document with two minor editorial issues 
> remaining from the version previously reviewed.
>
>
> Issues:
>
> From ID-nits:
>
>   -- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC7240,
>      but the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.
>
>   Specifically I think the nits checker is looking to see RFC724O
>   called up in the Abstract.
>
>
>
> =========
> It says in section 5
>
> 5.  Implementation Status
>
>    < RFC Editor: before publication please remove this section, the
>    reference to [RFC7942], and any "URIs" section >
>
> I think you ned the whole of section 9.3 to be deleted. If that is so
> it would be clearer to the editor to say so.

-- 
Kenneth Murchison
Principal Systems Software Engineer
Carnegie Mellon University