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Re: Review of draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01

Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Mon, 13 February 2017 22:50 UTC

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From: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
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Subject: Re: Review of draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01
To: Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com>
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Thanks, Robert, for the review.

Barry

On Mon, Feb 13, 2017 at 4:42 PM, Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> wrote:
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review Date: 2017-02-13
> IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-09
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary: Ready for publication as part of BCP 14.
>
> I personally find the first bullet in the NEW section to be chatty,
> and think it could be reduced while strengthening the message, but
> enough eyes have been on this that I don't object to it going through
> as is.
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> Major issues:
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> Minor issues:
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> Nits/editorial comments:
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