Review of draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01

Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com> Mon, 13 February 2017 21:42 UTC

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From: Robert Sparks <rjsparks@nostrum.com>
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Subject: Review of draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01
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Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review Date: 2017-02-13
IETF LC End Date: 2017-03-09
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready for publication as part of BCP 14.

I personally find the first bullet in the NEW section to be chatty,
and think it could be reduced while strengthening the message, but
enough eyes have been on this that I don't object to it going through
as is.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

Review of draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01 Robert Sparks
Re: Review of draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01 Barry Leiba
Re: Review of draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-01 Barry Leiba