Re: [IPsec] Last Call: <draft-kivinen-ipsecme-ikev2-rfc5996bis-02.txt> (Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2)) to Internet Standard

Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi> Fri, 25 April 2014 12:38 UTC

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Date: Fri, 25 Apr 2014 15:37:50 +0300
From: Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi>
To: Yoav Nir <ynir.ietf@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: [IPsec] Last Call: <draft-kivinen-ipsecme-ikev2-rfc5996bis-02.txt> (Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2)) to Internet Standard
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Yoav Nir writes:
> I assume you mean that you don’t sign with public keys. Replacing
> “sign” with “validate” makes for a strange sentence, because the
> sentence is about sending (and presumably signing) rather than
> receiving (and validating). 
> 
> How about:
> “If multiple certificate are sent, the first MUST contain the public
> key associated with the private key used to sign the AUTH payload” 

Changed text to :

If multiple certificates are sent, the first certificate MUST contain
the public key associated with the private key used to sign the AUTH
payload.

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