Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sieve-imap-sieve-06
"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Thu, 23 August 2012 10:34 UTC
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From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
To: draft-ietf-sieve-imap-sieve.all@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-sieve-imap-sieve-06
Date: Thu, 23 Aug 2012 13:33:01 +0200
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-sieve-imap-sieve-06 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2012-8-22 IETF LC End Date: 2012-8-29 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. At the end of section 3.7 and 3.8 "acton" "should be "action"