Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pals-mc-pon-04

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Mon, 05 September 2016 20:45 UTC

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From: "Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
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Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pals-mc-pon-04
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Document:  draft-ietf-pals-mc-pon-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2016-9-5

IETF LC End Date: 2016-9-7

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

 

 

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