Review of draft-ietf-nvo3-use-case-15

Tim Wicinski <tjw.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 24 January 2017 12:29 UTC

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Reviewer: Tim Wicinski
Review result: Ready

Hi

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
IESG.  These comments were written with the intent of improving the
operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not
addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG
review.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments
just like any other last call comments. 

Document Reviewed: draft-ietf-nvo3-use-case

Status: Ready

Summary:  The issues raised during the GEN-ART review (among others)
were similar to the issues I had, and they have been addressed.