Re: Proposed IETF Websites’ Privacy Policy; Community Input Requested

[Tom Taylor <[e-mail]>]

The content seems generally OK. I think there should be explicit mention 
of attendance lists under "Certain information will be accessible to the 
public".


Under "What Information do we collect?"the third and fourth paragraphs 
have lost some letters or words:

"your interaction with the site, programs, and services, hat IETF may 
offer to you,"                                           ^

"Due to the nature of the, your communications"

At various places I might have editorial suggestions (e.g., remove 
excess commas), but after a day of doing so for another document I don't 
feel like continuing the work here. Maybe later.

Tom Taylor

On 03/02/2015 10:52 AM, IETF Administrative Director wrote:
> The IAOC would like community input on a proposed IETF websites’ Privacy Policy.
>
> We are required by California law (and good net citizenship) to have an accurate
> privacy policy on our websites.  Counsel have reviewed this statement for compliance
> with US and EU privacy regulations.
>
> The policy discusses the following:
>    a.  Information collected
>    b.  What’s done with the information
>    c.  Information accessible to the public
>    d.  Cookies and other tracking technologies
>    e.  Participant database
>    f.  Security
>    g.  Links
>    h.  Discussion groups
>    i.  Children
>    j.  Compliance
>    k.  Consent and changes to this policy
>
> The proposed Privacy Policy is located here:
> <https://iaoc.ietf.org/documents/IETF-Website-Privacy-Policy-16Jan15.pdf>
>
> The IAOC will consider all comments received by 17 February 2015.
>
> Thanks.
>
> Scott Bradner
> Chair
> IAOC Legal Committee
>
>