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"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sat, 04 December 2010 15:42 UTC

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From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
To: 'General Area Review Team' <gen-art@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary.all@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Gen-ART IETF LC review of draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary
Date: Sat, 04 Dec 2010 17:41:32 +0200
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Hi,

 

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

 

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

 

Document: draft-ietf-ecrit-lost-servicelistboundary-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date: 2010-12-04

IETF LC End Date: 2010-12-14

IESG Telechat date: (if known)

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. There
are some nits

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

Nits/editorial comments: 

1.      In the abstract the document starts with LoST,  Please expand to
Location-to-Service Translation

2.      At the end of section 3.2  in the note, I think that the first
"getServiceListBoundary" should be " getServiceBoundary"

 

 

 

Roni Even

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