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RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-09

"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Tue, 24 May 2011 10:16 UTC

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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
To: 'Roni Even' <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap.all@tools.ietf.org
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Subject: RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-09
Date: Tue, 24 May 2011 11:15:44 +0100
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Thanks Roni,

> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> 1. Need to expand LDP when first mentioned.

LDP is a recognised acronym at
http://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc-style-guide/abbrev.expansion.txt and does not need
to be expanded.

Cheers,
Adrian

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