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Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-09

Nitin Bahadur <nitinb@juniper.net> Tue, 24 May 2011 16:22 UTC

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From: Nitin Bahadur <nitinb@juniper.net>
To: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, "draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap.all@tools.ietf.org>
Date: Tue, 24 May 2011 09:19:19 -0700
Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-09
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Thanks. I will take care of nits 2 & 3 in the next update. Will be ignoring nit #1, as per Adrian's comment.

Nitin


On 5/24/11 1:11 AM, "Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> wrote:

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-enhanced-dsmap-09
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date:2011-5-24
IETF LC End Date: 2011-5-30
IESG Telechat date:

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:


Nits/editorial comments:

1.       Need to expand LDP when first mentioned.
2.       Section 3.3.1.1 "The multipath data sub-TLV includes information multipath information" delete the first information.
3.       In section 3.3.1.2 "When the Downstream Detailed Mapping TLV in sent in the echo response" should be is sent.

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