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Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Wed, 17 October 2012 09:59 UTC

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From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
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Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

 

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

 

Document: draft-leiba-5322upd-from-group-06

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2012-10-17

IETF LC End Date: 2012-11-6

IESG Telechat date:

 

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

1.	It is not clear from the draft what the use case for using the group
construct is.  Section 3 talks about the issues with using the group
construct and recommend limited use, but this is the only information.
2.	Section 2.1 says "If the sender field uses group syntax, the group
MUST NOT contains more than one mailbox."  Why use a group name for a single
mailbox?

 

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