Re: [Insipid] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-insipid-logme-marking-12: (with COMMENT)

Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Fri, 14 September 2018 19:42 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Insipid] Adam Roach's No Objection on draft-ietf-insipid-logme-marking-12: (with COMMENT)
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Hi! Thanks, these all look like good resolutions to the issues I raised. 
I have a small handful of editorial nits (below). They're extremely 
minor, and all have to do with hyphenation of compound adjectives.

/a


On 9/6/18 5:42 AM, Dawes, Peter, Vodafone Group wrote:

> oIf a dialog is to be marked, the only way to initiate "log me"
>
> marking is at the dialog creating request (e.g.SIP INVITE) sent
>

"...dialog-creating request..."

> oIf a "log me" aware endpoint or intermediary that is already "log
>

'If a "log me"-aware endpoint...'

> oIf a "log me" aware endpoint or intermediary that is not "log me"
>

'If a "log me"-aware endpoint...'

>
> oBy requesting header and session level privacy from SIP
>
> intermediaries using the Privacy header
>

"...header- and session-level privacy..."