Re: [Int-area] [v6ops] New Version Notification for draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe-health-03.txt
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To: Richard Patterson <richard@helix.net.nz>, "v6ops@ietf.org list" <v6ops@ietf.org>, "intarea-chairs@ietf.org" <intarea-chairs@ietf.org>, "dhcwg@ietf.org" <dhcwg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Int-area] [v6ops] New Version Notification for draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe-health-03.txt
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Hi Richard, Thank you for addressing the comments. The -03 looks good to me. FWIW, I do have some additional comments that you may find at: * PDF: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/blob/master/draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe-health-03-rev%20Med.pdf * DOC: https://github.com/boucadair/IETF-Drafts-Reviews/raw/master/draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe-health-03-rev%20Med.doc The main comments: * Use 3 as default retry interval value (consistent with BBF TR-124 and some existing implementations) * Generalize the procedure to cover any dynamic configuration means (DHCP, as an example among others). * Add a guard to prevent loopback and multicast addresses as alternate target @ * Double check some part of the text to reflect that both interval and retry-interval are now used. I do support this effort to be adopted in dhcwg or int-area. Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : v6ops [mailto:v6ops-bounces@ietf.org] De la part de Richard Patterson > Envoyé : vendredi 29 juin 2018 18:22 > À : v6ops@ietf.org list; intarea-chairs@ietf.org; dhcwg@ietf.org > Objet : [v6ops] New Version Notification for draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe- > health-03.txt > > Version -03 of draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe-health has now been uploaded. > Thanks to Med, Jean-Yves and Dusan for their review and comments. > > The noteworthy changes since -02 include: > - Added DHCP option flag to force ARP/ND for health checks. > - Populated IANA Considerations. > - Added Retry Interval distinct timer for between failed checks. > - Added default parameter values. > > -Richard > > > On 29/06/2018, 17:14, "internet-drafts@ietf.org" > <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote: > > > A new version of I-D, draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe-health-03.txt > has been successfully submitted by Richard Patterson and posted to the > IETF repository. > > Name: draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe-health > Revision: 03 > Title: IP over Ethernet (IPoE) Session Health Checking > Document date: 2018-06-29 > Group: Individual Submission > Pages: 15 > URL: > https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe-health- > 03.txt > Status: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe-health/ > Htmlized: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe-health-03 > Htmlized: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe-health > Diff: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-patterson-intarea-ipoe-health-03 > > Abstract: > PPP over Ethernet clients have the functionality to detect path > unavailability by using PPP Keepalives. IP over Ethernet does not > have this functionality, and it is not specified in the IETF when an > IP over Ethernet client should consider its WAN connectivity down, > unless there is a physical layer link down event. > > This document describes a mechanism for IP over Ethernet clients to > achieve connectivity validation, similar to that of PPP over > Ethernet, by using BFD Echo, or ARP and Neighbor Discovery functions. > > > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of > submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > The IETF Secretariat > > _______________________________________________ > v6ops mailing list > v6ops@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/v6ops
- Re: [Int-area] [v6ops] New Version Notification f… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Int-area] [v6ops] New Version Notification f… Richard Patterson
- Re: [Int-area] [v6ops] New Version Notification f… Richard Patterson
- Re: [Int-area] [v6ops] New Version Notification f… mohamed.boucadair