Re: [Int-dir] Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-alt-mark-10

Brian Haberman <brian@innovationslab.net> Wed, 20 September 2017 19:21 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Int-dir] Intdir last call review of draft-ietf-ippm-alt-mark-10
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Hi Carlos,

On 9/20/17 3:11 PM, Carlos Pignataro (cpignata) wrote:

>> * The shepherd writeup mentions IPR 2557 in relation to this draft. However, the IPR declaration is only associated with the original individual draft. The IPR declaration needs to be updated to refer to the WG draft.
>>
>> [GF]: If needed we can renew the IPR declaration to refer to the WG draft.
>>
> 
> It might not hurt, but at the same time, a question:
> 
> RFC 8179 S 5.4.2 talks about inheritance of IPR disclosures:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8179#section-5.4.2
> 
>       IPR
>       disclosures against a particular Contribution are assumed to be
>       inherited by revisions of the Contribution and by any RFCs that
>       are published from the Contribution unless the disclosure has been
>       updated or withdrawn.
> 
> It is not clear if a “revision” of an I-D as a contribution includes renaming it as WG document, merges, etc.
> 
> The data tracker tooling seems to be coded such that, if there is a Replaced_by relationship, the IPR declaration follows:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/?submit=draft&id=draft-ietf-ippm-alt-mark
> “Total number of IPR disclosures found: 1."
> 
> And contributors all acknowledged IPR 2557.
> 
> So the question:
> 
>> * The shepherd writeup mentions IPR 2557 in relation to this draft. However, the IPR declaration is only associated with the original individual draft. The IPR declaration needs to be updated to refer to the WG draft.
> 
> 
> Does it carry forward?

I think the answer is "sort of"...

If I look at the datatracker page for the WG, I do see 2557 listed
against the WG draft here:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/wg/ippm/documents/

However, I do not see that declaration when looking at the HTML'ized
version of the draft here:

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ippm-alt-mark-10

while I do see it listed against the original individual submission here:

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-tempia-ippm-p3m-03

The IPR search page does show the indirect disclosure based on the
individual submission.

So, it looks like an issue in the HTML rendering of the WG draft.

Regards,
Brian