Re: [Int-dir] [Ext] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting-07
Roy Arends <roy.arends@icann.org> Wed, 14 February 2024 00:39 UTC
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From: Roy Arends <roy.arends@icann.org>
To: Carlos Pignataro <cpignata@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Int-dir] [Ext] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting-07
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Hi Carlos, > On 9 Dec 2023, at 14:43, Carlos Pignataro via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > > Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro > Review result: Ready with Nits > > draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting > > Hi! > > I was assigned a review of draft-ietf-dnsop-caching-resolution-failures, for an > INTDIR Telechat Review. > > Review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dns-error-reporting > Type Telechat Review > Team Internet Area Directorate (intdir) > Deadline 2023-12-09 > Reviewer Carlos Pignataro > > In general, I found the document to be useful and clear, effectively organzied, > and easy to follow for an implementor. > > Please find below only some minor nits for consideration: > > 1. Append a comma after "i.e.". > > 2. Change "Well known" to "Well-known". > > 3. Capitalization of "RRset" vs. "RRSet", although RFC 8499 mentions both. > > 4. Should RFC 2199 be a Normative reference instead of Informative? Ah, good catch. Will fix ‘em all Thanks! Roy > Thanks! > > Carlos. >
- [Int-dir] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-dn… Carlos Pignataro via Datatracker
- Re: [Int-dir] [Ext] Intdir telechat review of dra… Roy Arends
- Re: [Int-dir] [Ext] Intdir telechat review of dra… Carlos Pignataro