Re: [Int-dir] [Last-Call] Intdir telechat review of draft-ietf-netconf-ssh-client-server-38

Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> Tue, 27 February 2024 18:28 UTC

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Hi Sheng,

Thank you for your review.
One comment below.

Kent


> On Feb 25, 2024, at 4:28 AM, Sheng Jiang via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I have reviewed this document as part of the IntArea directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
> in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG
> chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
> comments.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-netconf-ssh-client-server-38
> Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
> Review Date: 2024-02-25
> Result: Ready
> 
> This Standards Track document specifies IETF modules that define
> features and groupings to model "generic" SSH clients and SSH 
> servers. This document is well-written clearly define the newly
> increased field and the relevant behaviors. It is READY for 
> publication from the INT area perspective.
> 
> Besides, I did notice, on the datatracker page of this document,
> it shows "11 errors" for Yang Validation. I am not a YANG expert.
> But from my glance, I guess it is the Yang validation tool of our 
> datatracker a little bit too sensentive.

Yes, Datatracker incorrectly thinks that the Python code in the Appendix is a YANG module.
IDK who to alert regarding this malfunction...

Kent