Re: [IPFIX] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6728 (4370)

Paul Aitken <paitken@brocade.com> Thu, 21 May 2015 16:49 UTC

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Subject: Re: [IPFIX] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6728 (4370)
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cut-n-paste typo; editorial.

The meaning is clear from the immediately preceding diagram (Figure 29).

P.


On 21/05/15 17:44, Stewart Bryant wrote:
> Surely it is technical rather than editorial.
>
> Stewart
>
> On 21/05/2015 17:23, Paul Aitken wrote:
>> Good catch, Michael!
>>
>> P.
>>
>>
>> On 21/05/15 17:16, RFC Errata System wrote:
>>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6728,
>>> "Configuration Data Model for the IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX)
>>> and Packet Sampling (PSAMP) Protocols".
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> You may review the report below and at:
>>> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6728&eid=4370
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> Type: Editorial
>>> Reported by: Michael Duggan <mwd@cert.org>
>>>
>>> Section: 4.8
>>>
>>> Original Text
>>> -------------
>>>      isFlowKey:  If this state parameter is present, this is a Flow Key
>>>         field.
>>>         This parameter is only available for non-Options Templates (i.e.,
>>>         if setId is 2).
>>>
>>>      isFlowKey:  If this state parameter is present, this is a scope
>>>         field.
>>>         This parameter is only available for Options Templates (i.e., if
>>>         setId is 3).
>>>
>>> Corrected Text
>>> --------------
>>>      isFlowKey:  If this state parameter is present, this is a Flow Key
>>>         field.
>>>         This parameter is only available for non-Options Templates (i.e.,
>>>         if setId is 2).
>>>
>>>      isScope:    If this state parameter is present, this is a scope
>>>         field.
>>>         This parameter is only available for Options Templates (i.e., if
>>>         setId is 3).
>>>
>>> Notes
>>> -----
>>>
>>>
>>> Instructions:
>>> -------------
>>> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>>> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
>>> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
>>> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>>>
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> RFC6728 (draft-ietf-ipfix-configuration-model-11)
>>> --------------------------------------
>>> Title               : Configuration Data Model for the IP Flow
>>> Information Export (IPFIX) and Packet Sampling (PSAMP) Protocols
>>> Publication Date    : October 2012
>>> Author(s)           : G. Muenz, B. Claise, P. Aitken
>>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>>> Source              : IP Flow Information Export
>>> Area                : Operations and Management
>>> Stream              : IETF
>>> Verifying Party     : IESG
>>>
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