Re: [IPFIX] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6728 (4370)

Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com> Thu, 21 May 2015 17:45 UTC

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Date: Thu, 21 May 2015 19:45:40 +0200
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Subject: Re: [IPFIX] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6728 (4370)
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On 21/05/2015 18:48, Paul Aitken wrote:
> cut-n-paste typo; editorial.
>
> The meaning is clear from the immediately preceding diagram (Figure 29).
That was my rational in accepting this as editorial.
And I checked http://www.rfc-editor.org/status_type_desc.html
Granted, this one is on the boundary.

Regards, Benoit
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> P.
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> On 21/05/15 17:44, Stewart Bryant wrote:
>> Surely it is technical rather than editorial.
>>
>> Stewart
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>> On 21/05/2015 17:23, Paul Aitken wrote:
>>> Good catch, Michael!
>>>
>>> P.
>>>
>>>
>>> On 21/05/15 17:16, RFC Errata System wrote:
>>>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6728,
>>>> "Configuration Data Model for the IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX)
>>>> and Packet Sampling (PSAMP) Protocols".
>>>>
>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>> You may review the report below and at:
>>>> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6728&eid=4370
>>>>
>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>> Type: Editorial
>>>> Reported by: Michael Duggan <mwd@cert.org>
>>>>
>>>> Section: 4.8
>>>>
>>>> Original Text
>>>> -------------
>>>>      isFlowKey:  If this state parameter is present, this is a Flow 
>>>> Key
>>>>         field.
>>>>         This parameter is only available for non-Options Templates 
>>>> (i.e.,
>>>>         if setId is 2).
>>>>
>>>>      isFlowKey:  If this state parameter is present, this is a scope
>>>>         field.
>>>>         This parameter is only available for Options Templates 
>>>> (i.e., if
>>>>         setId is 3).
>>>>
>>>> Corrected Text
>>>> --------------
>>>>      isFlowKey:  If this state parameter is present, this is a Flow 
>>>> Key
>>>>         field.
>>>>         This parameter is only available for non-Options Templates 
>>>> (i.e.,
>>>>         if setId is 2).
>>>>
>>>>      isScope:    If this state parameter is present, this is a scope
>>>>         field.
>>>>         This parameter is only available for Options Templates 
>>>> (i.e., if
>>>>         setId is 3).
>>>>
>>>> Notes
>>>> -----
>>>>
>>>>
>>>> Instructions:
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>>>> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>>>> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
>>>> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
>>>> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>>>>
>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>> RFC6728 (draft-ietf-ipfix-configuration-model-11)
>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>> Title               : Configuration Data Model for the IP Flow
>>>> Information Export (IPFIX) and Packet Sampling (PSAMP) Protocols
>>>> Publication Date    : October 2012
>>>> Author(s)           : G. Muenz, B. Claise, P. Aitken
>>>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>>>> Source              : IP Flow Information Export
>>>> Area                : Operations and Management
>>>> Stream              : IETF
>>>> Verifying Party     : IESG
>>>>
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