Re: [IPFIX] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-07.txt

Dear IPFIXers,

This is a minor update to address the issues reported by Ben Campbell in 
his Gen-ART review.

Specifically:

* changed the 3rd paragraph of the intro to clarify that:

    ... the PSAMP
    Information Model [RFC5477] and the IPFIX Information Model [RFC7011]
    don't yet contain enough Information Elements related to data link
    layer,

* corrected 3.2.18.  droppedL2OctetTotalCount to define a total counter 
rather than a delta counter:

    Description:

       The total number of octets in observed layer 2 packets (including
       the layer 2 header) that were dropped by packet treatment since
       the (re-)initialization of the Metering Process.

* I also took the opportunity to make some small formatting changes to 
Figures 1, 2, and 3 in section 6, to avoid idnits complaining that 
Figure 3 is overly wide, and to keep Figures 1 and 2 in sync.

* One issue remains from Ben's review:

    It looks like this draft updates at least RFC5477. If so, this should be indicated in the header and in the abstract.

Our view is that IANA's IPFIX registry is now the ultimate reference, so 
we don't constantly have to be referring back to old RFCs in each new 
draft.

TBD.

P.

On 04/11/2013 13:07, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>   This draft is a work item of the IP Flow Information Export Working Group of the IETF.
>
> 	Title           : Information Elements for Data Link Layer Traffic Measurement
> 	Author(s)       : Shingo Kashima
>                            Atsushi Kobayashi
>                            Paul Aitken
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-07.txt
> 	Pages           : 34
> 	Date            : 2013-11-04
>
> Abstract:
>     This document describes Information Elements related to the data link
>     layer.  They are used by the IP Flow Information Export (IPFIX)
>     protocol for encoding measured data link layer traffic information.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring
>
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-07
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipfix-data-link-layer-monitoring-07
>
>
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