[ippm] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-22: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 03 December 2019 19:20 UTC

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Subject: [ippm] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-22: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ippm-metric-registry-22: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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* Section 9.  Please consider adding something approximately along the lines of:

The aggregated results of the performance metrics described in this registry
can reveal network topology information that might be considered sensitive.  If
this is the case, access control mechanism should be applied.

* Editorial Nits:
- Section 7.1.2. Typo. s/obervations/ observations/
- Section 7.1.3. Typo. s/formated/formatted/
- Section 7.3.1.  Typo. s/unambigious/unambiguous/
- Section 7.3.2.  Typo. s/wether/whether/
- Section 7.3.5.  Typo. s/accomodated/accommodated/
- Section 7.4.4.  Typo. s/calbration/calibration/
- Section 8.1. Spacing. s/[RFC8126]policy/[RFC8126] policy/
- Section 8.2.  Typo. s/Regsirty/Registry/
- Section 8.2. Typo. s/unchamged/unchanged/
- Section 9.  Typo. s/secuity/security/