[ippm] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-11: (with COMMENT)

[Alissa Cooper <[e-mail]>]

Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-yang-11: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I support Adam's DISCUSS.

Section 1.1: I'm surprised to see the two references to the long-expired NFVRG
drafts. If a reference to describe virtualized infrastructure using
orchestration is really needed (I'm not convinced that it is), I would assume a
better reference exists from outside the IETF/IRTF.

Section 5.2:

OLD
"Encrypted mode 'makes it impossible to alter
              timestamps undetectably.' See also Section 4 of RFC 7717
              and Section 6 of RFC 4656."

NEW
"Encrypted mode 'makes it impossible to alter
              timestamps undetectably' [Section 6 of RFC 4656]. See also
              Section 4 of RFC 7717."

Process comment more for the AD: the YANG doctors reviewed a version of this
more than a year ago. Is that typical or would they normally review again
during IETF LC?