Re: [ippm] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-07.txt

[Greg Mirsky <[e-mail]>]

Hi Thomas,
I agree with the proposed change.

Regards,
Greg

On Tue, Jul 4, 2023 at 10:35 PM <[e-mail]> wrote:

> Dear Tianran,
>
> Thanks a lot for add IOAM-DEX. That looks perfect to me.
>
> Greg and I made the following editorial remarks on the mailing list:
>
> Greg> The scope of the IOAM YANG data model - is limited to configuration
> or also includes the presentation of IOAM data types defined in RFC 9197?
> Thomas> I suggest to change the following sentence in the abstract from
>
> "This document defines a YANG module for the IOAM function."
>
> To
>
> "This document defines a YANG module for configuring IOAM functions."
>
>
> I think that would make it clear that the specified YANG module doesn't
> cover IOAM data types.
>
> Greg: Would the proposed sentence change in the abstract also address your
> concern?
>
> Best wishes
> Thomas
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Tianran Zhou <[e-mail]>
> Sent: Tuesday, June 27, 2023 12:08 PM
> To: IETF IPPM WG <[e-mail]>
> Cc: Greg Mirsky <[e-mail]>; Graf Thomas, INI-NET-VNC-HCS <
> [e-mail]>
> Subject: FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-07.txt
>
> Hi Greg, Thomas, and WG,
>
> As requested in the WGLC, I updated the draft with ioam-dex included.
> Please check if it works for you.
>
> Cheers,
> Tianran
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: [e-mail] [mailto:[e-mail]]
> Sent: Tuesday, June 27, 2023 6:05 PM
> To: Frank Brockners <[e-mail]>; Jim Guichard <
> [e-mail]>; Srihari Raghavan <[e-mail]>;
> Tianran Zhou <[e-mail]>
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-07.txt
>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-07.txt has been
> successfully submitted by Tianran Zhou and posted to the IETF repository.
>
> Name:           draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang
> Revision:       07
> Title:          A YANG Data Model for In-Situ OAM
> Document date:  2023-06-27
> Group:          ippm
> Pages:          30
> URL:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-07.txt
> Status:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang/
> Htmlized:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang
> Diff:
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-07
>
> Abstract:
>    In situ Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (IOAM) collects
>    operational and telemetry information in the packet while the packet
>    traverses a path between two points in the network.  RFC9197
>    discusses the data fields and associated data types for IOAM.  This
>    document defines a YANG module for the IOAM function.
>
>
>
>
> The IETF Secretariat
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