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Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com> Wed, 05 July 2023 06:10 UTC

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From: Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com>
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Hi Thomas,

Thanks very much for the follow up.
I am good with the changes.

Cheers,
Tianran 

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From: Thomas.Graf@swisscom.com [mailto:Thomas.Graf@swisscom.com] 
Sent: Wednesday, July 5, 2023 1:35 PM
To: Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com>; ippm@ietf.org
Cc: gregimirsky@gmail.com; alex.huang-feng@insa-lyon.fr
Subject: RE: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-07.txt

Dear Tianran,

Thanks a lot for add IOAM-DEX. That looks perfect to me.

Greg and I made the following editorial remarks on the mailing list:

Greg> The scope of the IOAM YANG data model - is limited to configuration or also includes the presentation of IOAM data types defined in RFC 9197?
Thomas> I suggest to change the following sentence in the abstract from

"This document defines a YANG module for the IOAM function."

To

"This document defines a YANG module for configuring IOAM functions."


I think that would make it clear that the specified YANG module doesn't cover IOAM data types.

Greg: Would the proposed sentence change in the abstract also address your concern?

Best wishes
Thomas

-----Original Message-----
From: Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com> 
Sent: Tuesday, June 27, 2023 12:08 PM
To: IETF IPPM WG <ippm@ietf.org>
Cc: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>; Graf Thomas, INI-NET-VNC-HCS <Thomas.Graf@swisscom.com>
Subject: FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-07.txt

Hi Greg, Thomas, and WG,

As requested in the WGLC, I updated the draft with ioam-dex included.
Please check if it works for you.

Cheers,
Tianran

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Sent: Tuesday, June 27, 2023 6:05 PM
To: Frank Brockners <fbrockne@cisco.com>; Jim Guichard <james.n.guichard@futurewei.com>; Srihari Raghavan <srihari@cisco.com>; Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com>
Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-07.txt


A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-07.txt has been successfully submitted by Tianran Zhou and posted to the IETF repository.

Name:		draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang
Revision:	07
Title:		A YANG Data Model for In-Situ OAM
Document date:	2023-06-27
Group:		ippm
Pages:		30
URL:            https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-07.txt
Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang/
Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang
Diff:           https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-07

Abstract:
   In situ Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (IOAM) collects
   operational and telemetry information in the packet while the packet
   traverses a path between two points in the network.  RFC9197
   discusses the data fields and associated data types for IOAM.  This
   document defines a YANG module for the IOAM function.

                                                                                  


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