[Ips] ips WG Last Call Complete - Node Architecture Key draft
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This ips WG Last Call on the following draft is complete: Declarative Public Extension Key for iSCSI Node Architecture draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-nodearch-key-01.txt The only comments I have on this draft seen are mine, and they're entirely editorial, so this draft has passed WG Last Call. The draft author (Dave Wysochanski) should submit a revised version addressing all of those comments. With respect to the following comment: > The only change I think might not be necessary is the one in Section 4. > There was an error in the -00 version of the draft, but I think the -01 > version is ok. > >> Section 4: >> >> The choice of which countermeasure is most appropriate depends on the >> environment. However, the first countermeasure may be acceptable in >> many environments, since it provides a compromise between sending too >> much information and the other more complete countermeasures of not >> sending the key at all or using IPsec. >> >> I think this should say 'However, the latter countermeasure'. Recheck >> this text with respect to the immediately preceding paragraph in the >> draft. What needs to be done is in the last sentence quoted - recheck Section 4 in the next version to make sure this paragraph is consistent with the previous one. Please make sure the next version of the draft passes the online ID Nits Checker at: http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ *before* submitting it in order to avoid being told to resubmit yet another version that does pass those checks. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Senior Technologist EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 black_david@emc.com Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- _______________________________________________ Ips mailing list Ips@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ips