Re: [Ips] WG Last Call review: draft-ietf-ips-iscsi-nodearch-key-01.txt

Thanks.

The only change I think might not be necessary is the one in Section 4.
There was an error in the -00 version of the draft, but I think the -01
version is ok.

> 
> Section 4:
> 
>    The choice of which countermeasure is most appropriate depends on the
>    environment.  However, the first countermeasure may be acceptable in
>    many environments, since it provides a compromise between sending too
>    much information and the other more complete countermeasures of not
>    sending the key at all or using IPsec.
> 
> I think this should say 'However, the latter countermeasure'.  Recheck
> this text with respect to the immediately preceding paragraph in the
> draft.
> 

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