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Re: [Ips] ips WG Last Call: iSCSI Implementer's Guide

Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@nokia.com> Thu, 08 February 2007 22:21 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars.eggert@nokia.com>
Subject: Re: [Ips] ips WG Last Call: iSCSI Implementer's Guide
Date: Thu, 08 Feb 2007 14:20:55 -0800
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Hi,

there is one nit remaining from my original AD review remaining in -05.

Abstract says:

    This document
    updates RFC 3720 and the text in this document supersedes the
    text in RFC 3720 when the two differ.

Introduction says:

    The text in this document, however, updates
    and supersedes the text in [RFC3720] and [RFC3721] whenever
    there is such a question.

Which is it? Only 3720 or also 3721.

Also, there needs to be a corresponding "Updates: " blurb in the  
first page boilerplate heading.

Lars



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