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Re: [IPsec] AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-qr-ikev2-08

Valery Smyslov <svan@elvis.ru> Wed, 06 November 2019 08:05 UTC

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From: Valery Smyslov <svan@elvis.ru>
To: 'Paul Wouters' <paul@nohats.ca>, 'Benjamin Kaduk' <kaduk@mit.edu>
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Hi Paul,

> [ignoring the nits and leaving that to the authors, although reading it
> again I would like to see "he" and "she" replaced by "it" everwhere]

Is it your strong preference? For me it's easier to use "it" everywhere,
but I'd like to see some advice from native speakers...

Regards,
Valery.

> Paul

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