[Iptel] Comments on draft-ietf-iptel-trip-mib-07.txt

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Mon, 11 August 2003 12:35 UTC

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From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>
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Date: Mon, 11 Aug 2003 15:33:55 +0300

The latest version addresses all major issues in my previous review, and does not seem to have introduced new ones. 

I am left with two editorial comments, which may be addressed down the road:

1. The copyright year in the DESCRIPTION clauses of the two MIB modules still says 2002.
2. One of the Area Directors was replaced since the previous Internet-Draft publication (Section 14). 

Thanks,

Dan