Re: <draft-ietf-6man-rfc1981bis-04.txt>

Bob Hinden <bob.hinden@gmail.com> Tue, 31 January 2017 21:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: <draft-ietf-6man-rfc1981bis-04.txt>
Date: Tue, 31 Jan 2017 13:06:47 -0800
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Fred,

> On Jan 31, 2017, at 12:39 PM, Templin, Fred L <Fred.L.Templin@boeing.com> wrote:
> 
>> value or the minimum IPv6 next hope MTU if that is larger.
> 
> Spelling error - s/hope/hop

oops  :-(

Will fix in next version.

Bob

> 
> Fred
> 
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: ipv6 [mailto:ipv6-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Bob Hinden
>> Sent: Tuesday, January 31, 2017 11:33 AM
>> To: IPv6 List <ipv6@ietf.org>
>> Cc: Bob Hinden <bob.hinden@gmail.com>
>> Subject: <draft-ietf-6man-rfc1981bis-04.txt>
>> 
>> Hi,
>> 
>> I published a new version of rfc1981bis (-04).  Links to the document below.
>> 
>> The summary of changes in this version are:
>> 
>> 
>>      Changes based on AD Evaluation including removing details about
>>      RFC4821 algorithm in Section 1 , remove text about
>>      decrementing hop limit from Section 3, and removed text about
>>      obsolete security classifications from Section 5.2
>> .
>>      Editorial changes and clarification in Section 5.2 based on
>>      IP Directorate review by Donald Eastlake
>> 
>> A diff from the previous version can be found at:
>> 
>> https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-6man-rfc1981bis-04.txt
>> 
>> This is part of the project to move the core IPv6 specifications to Internet Standard.
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> Bob
>> 
>>> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-6man-rfc1981bis-04.txt
>>> has been successfully submitted by Robert M. Hinden and posted to the
>>> IETF repository.
>>> 
>>> Name:		draft-ietf-6man-rfc1981bis
>>> Revision:	04
>>> Title:		Path MTU Discovery for IP version 6
>>> Document date:	2017-01-31
>>> Group:		6man
>>> Pages:		17
>>> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-6man-rfc1981bis-04.txt
>>> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6man-rfc1981bis/
>>> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-6man-rfc1981bis-04
>>> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-6man-rfc1981bis-04
>>> 
>>> Abstract:
>>>  This document describes Path MTU Discovery for IP version 6.  It is
>>>  largely derived from RFC 1191, which describes Path MTU Discovery for
>>>  IP version 4.  It obsoletes RFC1981.
>>> 
>>> 
>