Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-14.txt

"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Fri, 15 May 2020 00:26 UTC

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From: "Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 15 May 2020 09:26:06 +0900
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Subject: Re: [ipwave] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-14.txt
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Hi Fred,
I will address those comments, too.
I am also preparing a revision letter to show how to address each question
and comment from
the reviewers as follows:

Zeungil (Ben) Kim (Hyundai Motors)
Zhiwei Yan (CNNIC)
Yong-Joon Joe (LSware)
Jung-Soo Park (ETRI)
Kyoungjae Sun (Soongsil University)
Nancy Cam-Winget (Cisco)
Fred L. Templin (The Boeing Company)

Thanks.

Best Regards,

Paul

On Fri, May 15, 2020 at 8:51 AM Templin (US), Fred L <
Fred.L.Templin@boeing.com> wrote:

> Hi Paul - I assume the comments I raised on the list beginning 4/14/2020
>
> will be addressed?
>
>
>
> Thanks - Fred
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>
>
> *From:* its [mailto:its-bounces@ietf.org] *On Behalf Of *Mr. Jaehoon Paul
> Jeong
> *Sent:* Thursday, May 14, 2020 2:55 PM
> *To:* Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>; CARLOS JESUS BERNARDOS CANO <
> cjbc@it.uc3m.es>; its@ietf.org
> *Cc:* Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke@cisco.com>; skku-iotlab-members <
> skku-iotlab-members@googlegroups.com>; Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
> *Subject:* Re: [ipwave] I-D Action:
> draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-14.txt
>
>
>
> Hi IPWAVE WG,
> I am still working for the revision with the reviewers.
> Since there are many challenging questions and comments
> along with my university work,
> I need more time and I will be able to finish
> the revision by the end of this May.
>
> Thanks for your patience and support.
>
> Best Regards,
> Paul
>
>
>
> 2020년 5월 7일 (목) 오후 12:25, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com
> <jaehoon..paul@gmail.com>>님이 작성:
>
> Hi IPWAVE WG,
>
> I am working for the revision with the reviewers.
>
> I need more time and I will be able to finish early next week.
>
> I am sorry for the delay.
>
>
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Paul
>
>
>
> On Fri, May 1, 2020 at 3:02 AM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Hi Russ, Carlos and IPWAVE WG,
>
> I need more time to address the reviewers' comments.
>
> I will be able to post the revised draft early next week.
>
>
>
> Thanks for your support and patience.
>
>
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Paul
>
>
>
> On Thu, Apr 9, 2020 at 7:19 PM Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <
> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> wrote:
>
> Hi Russ and Carlos,
>
> As you see, the following five people reviewed the IPWAVE PS draft
> according to the advice of our AD, Suresh:
>
>
>
> Zeungil (Ben) Kim (Hyundai Motors)
>
> Zhiwei Yan (CNNIC)
>
> Yong-Joon Joe (LSware)
>
> Jung-Soo Park (ETRI)
>
> Kyoungjae Sun (Soongsil University)
>
>
>
> I will revise our IPWAVE PS draft with their comments by the end of this
> April.
>
> With the revised draft, I believe you can do WGLC for it.
>
>
>
> Thanks.
>
>
>
> Best Regards,
>
> Paul
>
>
>
>
>
> 2020년 3월 10일 (화) 오전 4:46, Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>님이 작성:
>
> Paul believes that he has addressed all comments in revision:
>
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-14
>
>
>
> I think we need to let at least five reviewers..  Could you do a review of
> this revision?  Please respond to the WG mail list.
>
>
>
> Thanks,
>
>   Russ
>
>
>
>
>
> On Mar 9, 2020, at 2:17 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
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>
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IP Wireless Access in Vehicular
> Environments WG of the IETF.
>
>        Title           : IPv6 Wireless Access in Vehicular Environments
> (IPWAVE): Problem Statement and Use Cases
>        Author          : Jaehoon Paul Jeong (editor)
> Filename        : draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-14.txt
> Pages           : 32
> Date            : 2020-03-09
>
> Abstract:
>   This document discusses the problem statement and use cases of
>   IPv6-based vehicular networking for Intelligent Transportation
>   Systems (ITS).  The main scenarios of vehicular communications are
>   vehicle-to-vehicle (V2V), vehicle-to-infrastructure (V2I), and
>   vehicle-to-everything (V2X) communications.  First, this document
>   explains use cases using V2V, V2I, and V2X networking.  Next, it
>   makes a problem statement about key aspects in IPv6-based vehicular
>   networking, such as IPv6 Neighbor Discovery, Mobility Management, and
>   Security & Privacy.  For each key aspect, this document specifies
>   requirements for IPv6-based vehicular networking.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-14
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-14
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipwave-vehicular-networking-14
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
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> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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> Associate Professor
> Department of Software
> Sungkyunkwan University
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> Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com, pauljeong@skku.edu
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Mr. Jaehoon (Paul) Jeong, Ph.D.
Associate Professor
Department of Software
Sungkyunkwan University
Office: +82-31-299-4957
Email: jaehoon.paul@gmail.com, pauljeong@skku.edu
Personal Homepage: http://iotlab.skku.edu/people-jaehoon-jeong.php
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