[Jcardcal] Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-jcardcal-jcal-09: (with COMMENT)

["Alissa Cooper" <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-jcardcal-jcal-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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I'm good with this assuming the gen-art points and Barry's issues get
resolved. One nit in section 3.5.2:

"To ease processing in jCal, the value to such parameters
   MUST be represented in an array containing the separated values."
   
I think this is supposed to say "of such parameters".