[Jmap] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-jmap-quotas-10: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [Jmap] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-jmap-quotas-10: (with COMMENT)
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Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-jmap-quotas-10: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-jmap-quotas/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- # GEN AD review of draft-ietf-jmap-quotas-10 CC @larseggert Thanks to Thomas Fossati for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review (https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/oAEgfTC3LDk7eMWyNgtNlOTv8oE). I have not seen a public response to his review of -06? ## Comments ### Missing references No reference entries found for: `[RFC9110]`. ### Inclusive language Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see https://www.rfc-editor.org/part2/#inclusive_language for background and more guidance: * Term `he`; alternatives might be `they`, `them`, `their` ## Nits All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you did with these suggestions. ### Grammar/style #### Section 4, paragraph 16 ``` softLimit" (if present and different than null) and the "limit". * softLimit ^^^^ ``` Did you mean "different from"? "Different than" is often considered colloquial style. #### Section 4, paragraph 19 ``` warnLimit" (if present and different than null) but lower than the "limit". ^^^^ ``` Did you mean "different from"? "Different than" is often considered colloquial style. #### Section 4, paragraph 21 ``` "String|null" Arbitrary free, human readable, description of this quota. It ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ``` This word is normally spelled with a hyphen. #### Section 4, paragraph 23 ``` ull. Since "used" frequently changes but other properties are generally only ^^^^ ``` Use a comma before "but" if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short). ## Notes This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the [`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT]. [ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md [ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments [IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool
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