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Re: [Jmap] Deb Cooley's No Objection on draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-08: (with COMMENT)

Neil Jenkins <neilj@fastmailteam.com> Thu, 18 April 2024 06:07 UTC

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Date: Thu, 18 Apr 2024 16:06:44 +1000
From: Neil Jenkins <neilj@fastmailteam.com>
To: Deb Cooley <debcooley1@gmail.com>, iesg <iesg@ietf.org>
Cc: draft-ietf-jmap-sharing@ietf.org, jmap-chairs@ietf.org, IETF JMAP Mailing List <jmap@ietf.org>, Bron Gondwana <brong@fastmailteam.com>, arnt.gulbrandsen@icann.org
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Subject: Re: [Jmap] Deb Cooley's No Objection on draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-08: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Deb,

Thanks for your feedback.

> General, nit:  I'm personally not a fan of the tagging in the text version to
> signal bold and italic text in the html version.  Especially when it occurs
> adjacent to formal naming/format language.

I agree, and will talk to the RFC editors about the best way to handle this.

> General, very small nit:  A mix of Principal and principal occur throughout the
> document.  Pick one.  (I'm assuming the RFC editor will flag this)

I have published an updated draft <https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-09.html> that fixes this.

Cheers,
Neil.

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